vinval ([info]vinval) wrote,
@ 2007-04-03 16:31:00
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Current location:Kitchen Table
Current mood: chipper
Current music:Elephant Love Song Medley - Moulin Rouge
Entry tags:donut, fic, smut, xxxholic

Happy Late Birthday, Watanuki!
Title: Cake Batter
Word Count: 755
Rating: er, soft R, maybe?
Spoilers: Absolutely none!
Disclaimer: Boys owned by CLAMP, much to my dismay.
A/N: Okay, it's a few days late! Erm... I didn't even bother to give it more than a quick edit, so excuse any mistakes.

I made cookies to celebrate! *passes them out to her fellow 104 fangirls* Enjoy my weak attempt at smut!

“Hey.”

Watanuki spun to face Doumeki, leaning casually in the doorway of his kitchen. “What do you want now?”

Doumeki strolled over to where Watanuki was apron–clad in front of a large mixing bowl. How he managed to stroll when it was a grand total of three paces, Watanuki didn’t know.

“The take–out’s getting cold.” Doumeki crossed his arms. “It’ll be even worse than it already is if you don’t hurry up.”

Watanuki bristled. All he’d been hearing all night was complaints that take–out wouldn’t match his home–made version, and while the veiled compliments always made him feel like the king of the world, hearing it repeatedly on his own damned birthday was getting a little irritating. “Well, let it get cold. I made you what you wanted on your birthday, and I’m choosing not to cook on mine.”

Doumeki’s level gaze didn’t even flicker to the chocolate–covered spoon that Watanuki was brandishing fiercely. “Then why are you baking?”

Watanuki deflated. “Because none of the bakeries around here can make a decent cake.” He frowned down at the thick batter in the bowl. “Besides, all I have to do is pour it into the pan and put it in the oven.”

Watanuki was still contemplating his cake mix when Doumeki unfolded his arms and snatched the spoon out of Watanuki’s hand. “What are you doing?”

Doumeki just blinked. “Well, you don’t need it anymore, do you?”

“Well, no, but you can’t just walk around and grab utensils out of my hand whenever you please –“ Watanuki was stopped mid–rant.

Doumeki was pleasuring the spoon.

Or, at least in Watanuki’s mind, that’s what it looked like. Long, lingering licks, eyes closed, mouth wrapped around the narrow bowl of the spoon, sucking it so hard it was nearly spotless. Watanuki’s knees went weak when Doumeki cracked open his eyes. “That’s really… good.” He sounded surprised, like his master–chef boyfriend had done the impossible, although Watanuki already knew Doumeki appreciated the quality of his baking. Doumeki caught Watanuki’s rising blush. “What?”

Watanuki turned away. They’d fooled around, of course: Watanuki had come to value the low–seated rumbles in Doumeki’s chest when he happened to lick that one spot behind his ear, Doumeki was becoming very familiar with the dips and hollows of his upper body – but they’d never – Watanuki had never thought about –

He couldn’t even get the thought out without his face turning bright red.

Doumeki leaned over to look at Watanuki’s face, but Watanuki turned away. Okay, he couldn’t think it, but maybe he could imply it, but definitely not with Doumeki looking him square in the face. He’d die from the embarrassment, but that spoon

“I… think I know what I want for my birthday.” Watanuki managed to stammer, before peeking over at Doumeki, who had one eyebrow raised.

And promptly lifted the offending spoon back to his mouth and gave it a hearty suck, his lips making a popping noise as he released the pressure.

Watanuki’s vision swam, and next thing he knew, he was pinned to the front of the oven, the doors so warm they almost burned, but it didn’t compare to the heat radiating off the body against him. The kiss was hard and hungry, Doumeki’s hands roaming completely unashamed underneath Watanuki’s shirt, and Watanuki was soon a pile of hormones only held up by Doumeki’s hands and the rapidly expanding line of his hips. Doumeki broke away, his eyes as crazed as Watanuki felt. “Bedroom. Now.” He pulled away, bringing Watanuki’s arm with him, to shove him toward the hallway.

The infuriatingly practical portion of Watanuki’s mind protested. “But… dinner…”

“Will still taste just as bad reheated. You’re getting your birthday wish right now.” Watanuki lifted slightly surprised eyes at the gruffness in Doumeki’s voice as he gave Watanuki another shove. “Hurry up, won’t you?” He growled, and Watanuki started to stumble out of the kitchen, but Doumeki caught his arm again. “Don’t take off the apron.” He shoved the flustered boy one more time and gave one last glance around the kitchen, before throwing the spoon into the sink and grabbing the entire bowl of batter off the counter.

Watanuki was going to have to make more later, because Doumeki was planning on using the whole batch for obscene purposes, and given the look on his face when he’d practiced on the spoon, Watanuki wasn’t going to mind it one bit. Doumeki grinned wickedly to himself as he followed Watanuki down the hall.




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[info]misao_kunoichi
2007-04-04 12:05 am UTC (link)
Wow, that was hot. I loved it when Doumeki said, "Don't take of the apron." Lucky Watanuki--he gets an amazing birthday present. xD

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[info]vinval
2007-04-04 12:47 am UTC (link)
we all know and love Doumeki as a complete perv. ;)

thanks!

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[info]chidorinokoe
2007-04-04 12:13 am UTC (link)
That was a really fun read.

I never use this word under most circumstances... But it was really hot. Doumeki must have been one sexually frustrated boyfriend. XP I guess both his wish and Watanuki's came true, huh?


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[info]vinval
2007-04-04 12:24 am UTC (link)
indeed!

*beams* glad you liked it.

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[info]chidorinokoe
2007-04-04 12:34 am UTC (link)
lol. It's so rare for you not to post on livejournal everyday. I was thinking to myself, "Either she's busy with *gasp* real life, or she's going to have a fic up soon." I guess I was right.

And your new icon was hilarious! The one about Clamp manga and how someone will always end up losing an eye somehow. *frowns* It's a recurring theme, and I don't like it. At all. I'm getting sick of it pretty quickly. Stupid, evil Clamp.

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[info]vinval
2007-04-04 12:39 am UTC (link)
I saw one that said "CLAMP fandom: it's all fun and games until someone loses an eye." and the next frame: "and then it gets full of shippers."

I was completely unaware of how much of a recurring theme it was until I caught up with Tsubasa and heard it mentioned that Subaru from X also lost an eye... I'm not familiar with that one all the way through, though. But seriously, CLAMP, it'll only hold our attention so long.

took a break for a day since both my husband and I had a day off together. *sigh* happens so rarely...

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[info]chidorinokoe
2007-04-04 02:15 am UTC (link)
Don't even get me started... X/1999, xxxHolic, and Tsubasa all have characters missing eyes or having their eyes gouged out. It's like having to watch a neverending re-run of the worst episode in your favorite tv series. It's boring and tiring and just too angsty to handle, you wonder why they bother to mix it in with the main plot at all.

And I hope that, if I ever attempt smut, it will be as good as this. D: My writing skills in general needs alot of work, but I'm trying.

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[info]vinval
2007-04-04 06:26 am UTC (link)
I think the delightfulness of the smut can be chalked up to the fact I can't seem to force myself to write any, *ehem*, descriptive nouns, if you know what I mean. I... just can't. I try and suggestive right-before-the-smexin'-scene fics come out, and I can't figure out if that's a good thing or not. Because I'd like to be able to write tasteful actual-smut, eventually.

*bangs head off table* Maybe I should stop messing with a good thing before my brain implodes with embarrasement.

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[info]psychicdreams
2007-04-04 05:20 pm UTC (link)
Awww, I love your fics, so don't stress. They're so good, I'm just grateful I get them at all, much less ask for more ^^

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[info]retsuko
2007-04-04 12:44 am UTC (link)
I second all the "hot" comments above. Because this was really, really good. :-D

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[info]vinval
2007-04-04 12:47 am UTC (link)
Thanks! Now if I can work myself up to real smut... *one day, one day*

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[info]themodestotter
2007-04-04 02:27 am UTC (link)
*Promptly replaces spoon with Watanuki*

Go Doumeki go!

Seriously... HORNY! Doumeki will be all like, "So, do you want to be on bottom?"

FTW

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[info]vinval
2007-04-04 03:50 am UTC (link)
Watanuki will never be able to make cake without blushing again! *muahahaha!*

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[info]ariadnechan
2007-04-04 02:40 am UTC (link)
i love your fic was very sensual and so well the personalitiies of the characters!!!! thanks!!!
are you married too???? eoe can i friend you!!!

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[info]vinval
2007-04-04 03:48 am UTC (link)
Friended!

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[info]geblitzt
2007-04-04 03:12 am UTC (link)
O_O OMG!!!!!!!! AMAZING! Vinval, you write far to good fanfics so shortly after eachother, I adored this one!!!!
I've never seen you write DouWata this way, but man, it's hot! XP I loved the whole urgency in Doumeki's voice when he said "Bedroom, now" I think even I blushed.

It's short but sweet, my favourite kind! ^ ^ And the title fits perfectly of course....XP You've really made Doumeki into a naughty thing, haven't you? -laughs hard-

And another thing -starry eyes- I'm loving the icon!!!! Can I copy it?? XD

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[info]vinval
2007-04-04 03:47 am UTC (link)
That's ok - I was blushing the entire time I was writing this.

I imagine Doumeki would be rather... pent up, with you know, all the tense moments he and Watanuki have. :P

aren't you supposed to be in Thailand?

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[info]geblitzt
2007-04-04 12:27 pm UTC (link)
Hehn! Thanks, I will! And yes, ^ ^, I'm in Thailand, but with a laptop (can't live without it, it's such a darling) and an internet room where I spend my time when my parents are off 'shopping' for souveniers. Chiang Mai's nice for a holiday but my mom wanted to ship us over the to live and -after a weekend of heartache in case she really DID manage to find a house T-T - she discovered it's too dangerous to live and I'm all high! YAY! I was so scared, seriously....I like my home the place it is. XP. Some luck in a while....hehn.

OH! And while I was supposed to be writing Lit. Exam Practise Essays today, I went and wrote a POV songfic of KuroFai on "Rest in Pieces" with 1800 words! It will be posted sooooon~!!! XD Squeeee~!

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[info]vinval
2007-04-04 03:48 am UTC (link)
Oh - go ahead and copy the icon, but make sure to credit [info]dragonsquee.

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[info]yuko_hakubi
2007-04-04 03:18 am UTC (link)
Hahaha, I love it! Really, pervy! Doumeki is something that we all need more of. ^_^

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[info]vinval
2007-04-04 03:55 am UTC (link)
you know Doumeki's got a hard-core pervy streak under that unruffled exterior. ;)

thanks a lot!

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[info]snowaltz
2007-04-04 02:07 pm UTC (link)
My only complaint is that you stopped too early XD

The mental image of Doumeki sucking chocolate.. Hot indeed =D

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[info]vinval
2007-04-07 06:20 pm UTC (link)
err... yeah, still working up to that. for some reason my brain fries whenever I think about attempting anything more. X_X

but thanks!

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[info]morgif_kun
2007-04-04 04:11 pm UTC (link)
♥♥♥! I don't remember if I ever commented before, but I love your Holic fics! And this is no exception~

Btw I think ending it there just makes it more hot XD *fantasizes*

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[info]vinval
2007-04-07 06:21 pm UTC (link)
hey thanks!

btw that is one of my favorite icons ever! it makes me giggle everytime i see it!

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[info]seizansha
2007-04-05 04:57 am UTC (link)
hhhmmmm... chocolate... ^m^

yeah, the perv finally slips out! just in time for watanuki's b-day too!
gotta love how flustered doumeki got, i can't begin to imagine how hard it is to hide such horniness...

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[info]vinval
2007-04-07 06:52 pm UTC (link)
Poor, poor Doumeki. So pent up.

heheh. Thanks!

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[info]lunargeography
2007-04-05 02:08 pm UTC (link)
Dear god, how long had Doumeki been waiting for Watanuki to give in and ask for more? Too long, I'm sure. Thoroughly fun! And I totally love the idea that Doumeki is soooooo into the idea of giving Watanuki the spoon treatment!

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[info]vinval
2007-04-07 06:54 pm UTC (link)
Doumeki's the kind've guy that likes to take action, but when it comes to Watanuki... so patient, but all he needs is a "go". Poor guy.

heh. Thanks! Good to know you enjoyed it.

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